Here is my third elevator pitch (Tyler Jacobs);
https://youtu.be/jMXlGqdpUqk
Reflection and Feedback that produced change:
In the last pitch, I received feedback that suggested it was good that included product information and features in the pitch that made it easier for investors to see the value. In this version of the pitch I made sure to also include features that showed why it was worthwhile to invest in. I made sure to include that the app is mobile, that it gathers people together across the hospital, and that it provides real time metrics that can be monitored by hospital administration staff. This makes it easier to see the value in specifics. Additionally, I included these specifics to show the difference between this app and another resource available to customers that could meet their need. I also included that the app will help with specifics known to the industry, such as room assignments and staffing, and that it automates this for the management staff.
Hi Tyler! Great elevator pitch! I was very interested watching your video because I think you have such a fascinating business idea! When reading your feedback, I think it is super important to include information about your product and its value in a way that consumers are going to understand. Sometimes being technical with words isn’t all that good because it could throw off the audience. Great Post!
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